Emergency!!! A house is on Fire!!. Me And The fire fighters, Rushed to the house as soon As we got there The house was Burning!!. We Ran And got the hose. After we got the hose, we opened The, door. Slowly. So We Can Clear The door. The fire. Was on the doorway. We cleared the doorway and went in there was lots of fire. It took a lot of time to put the fire out. The fire was so strong that I Heard glass Shatter Apart and the house falling apart.
kia ora ofa nice peace of writing and the actions ofa
Hi ofa it sounds like I am really in the fire fighter and nice punchtions sorry I had writed that wrong but mabe Next you could write more detail about how he felt in the fire.